James 5:16

"effectual" and "fervent" are the equivalent of "great power" and "as it is working". So the ESV doesn't take it out. It translates it differently.

Actually, the ESV does a better job of maintaining the word order. The words in questions were at the end of the sentence (less emphasis). But the KJV moved them towards the beginning as if that is the main thrust. So in this case, as in most cases, the ESV is better.

 

Huh?:

KJB
The effectual fervent prayer of a righteous man availeth much.

ESV
The prayer of a righteous person has great power as it is working.

 

OK, what does "Fervent" = ?

 

They supplied it to suite the idea I suppose.

Just to clarify, I think the "availeth much" matches "has great power" of the ESV. And the "effectual fervent" matches the "as it is working".

I may have jumped the gun on trying to understand how the KJV translated what they did. But they still moved the Gr work ενεργουμενη to the beginning of the sentence even though it was at the end (less emphasis). The KJV has it at the beginning.

 

To answer the questions here: Yes it was appropriate. The ESV renders it better and more accurately. We know by examining the Greek.

PS-Part of this is flawed unless you make the KJV the standard. The ESV didn't take anything out of the passage that was not there in the first place. Rather, we could ask why the KJV felt it necessary to amplify a simple word (where we get our word "energize") to "effectual fervent"?

 

Thank you for 'clarifying'.

 

Don't tell that to Van --he will not stand for that in his novel world of translation. ;-)

 

Only insofar as you place so much emphasis on those words so as to hold up your view that this verse and this particular translation explains "the manner in which prayer was to be done". I think the ESV renders the original more accurately than the KJV.

 

I just had to chuckle when I saw the "as in most cases better" ESV using "fervent" in the very next verse:

KJB v.17
Elias...prayed earnestly that it might not rain

ESV v.17
Elijah...prayed fervently that it might not rain

 

Different word used. What are you chuckling about?

 

The effective prayer of a righteous person accomplishes much.

As translated above the assertion says little. If a prayer accomplishes much would it not have to be effective? How about a prayer according to the will of God accomplishes much? The idea being a "righteous person" would pray in the will of God.