Does this sound good?

[Guido]

To again behold [trochee], it is my hope, for which a long time I have asked of God. But not known to me is any appearing of [trochee] before my eyes, after her departing from me in the hospital, and after the dawning of my yearning to see her a new time. But it is my longing to behold her again, and to stablish and sustain a mighty bond with her, and to manifest kindness to her forevermore, which, in our common time in the hospital, I failed to show with abundance, and with steadfastness.

 

[Ascetic X]

To again behold [trochee], it is my hope, for which a long time I have asked of God. But not known to me is any appearing of [trochee] before my eyes, after her departing from me in the hospital, and after the dawning of my yearning to see her a new time. But it is my longing to behold her again, and to stablish and sustain a mighty bond with her, and to manifest kindness to her forevermore, which, in our common time in the hospital, I failed to show with abundance, and with steadfastness.

Was Trochee your wife? Have you beheld her in dreams? I saw my beloved deceased wife in a dream last night. Not sure if that is pleasant or just bewildering. We don’t fully know what we’ve got until it’s gone. I am sure that when a loved person departs, we are always tormented by regrets about how we should have treated them better, but focus instead on how good you were, and be grateful that you were not much worse.

 

[Guido]

Was Trochee your wife? Have you beheld her in dreams? I saw my beloved deceased wife in a dream last night. Not sure if that is pleasant or just bewildering. We don’t fully know what we’ve got until it’s gone. I am sure that when a loved person departs, we are always tormented by regrets about how we should have treated them better, but focus instead on how good you were, and be grateful that you were not much worse.

She was not my wife, and is not my wife. I am not married.

 

[Ben1445]

Was Trochee your wife? Have you beheld her in dreams? I saw my beloved deceased wife in a dream last night. Not sure if that is pleasant or just bewildering. We don’t fully know what we’ve got until it’s gone. I am sure that when a loved person departs, we are always tormented by regrets about how we should have treated them better, but focus instead on how good you were, and be grateful that you were not much worse.

What is a trochee? Here’s a quick and simple definition:

A trochee is a two-syllable metrical pattern in poetry in which a stressed syllable is followed by an unstressed syllable. The word "poet" is a trochee, with the stressed syllable of "po" followed by the unstressed syllable, “et”: Po-et.

It is a term referring to poetry.

 

[Guido]

Should I just give up on the person I wrote this poem about?

 

[Ben1445]

Should I just give up on the person I wrote this poem about?

I wouldn’t be able to give you an accurate answer to that question.
God knows. Take your concerns to Him. He gives wisdom.