Is this clear, accurate, and good?

[Guido]

The Creator of the Universe, the all-powerful, all-knowing, all-present, perfect, eternal God, who loves the entire world, is three in one --The Father, the Son, and the Holy Ghost -- against whom we all have sinned, and all continue to sin, thus incurring his righteous judgment, eternal condemnation, who sent His Son into this world by means of incarnation, God having appointed a virgin the one whom would deliver Him, Jesus Christ Lord of all Creation, who lived, died, and rose again, who died on a cross, who, when he died, suffered the wages of the sins of all, in whom, if we believe, he shall declare us to be righteous, imputing to us the righteousness of Christ, and granting us eternal life, in which no chance of losing it forevermore abides, in which we have, upon our death, entrance into Heaven, even Heaven a place of peace, and joy, and love, and righteousness, yes, Heaven, the dwelling place of Jesus.

 

[canadyjd]

The Creator of the Universe, the all-powerful, all-knowing, all-present, perfect, eternal God, who loves the entire world, is three in one --The Father, the Son, and the Holy Ghost -- against whom we all have sinned, and all continue to sin, thus incurring his righteous judgment, eternal condemnation, who sent His Son into this world by means of incarnation, God having appointed a virgin the one whom would deliver Him, Jesus Christ Lord of all Creation, who lived, died, and rose again, who died on a cross, who, when he died, suffered the wages of the sins of all, in whom, if we believe, he shall declare us to be righteous, imputing to us the righteousness of Christ, and granting us eternal life, in which no chance of losing it forevermore abides, in which we have, upon our death, entrance into Heaven, even Heaven a place of peace, and joy, and love, and righteousness, yes, Heaven, the dwelling place of Jesus.

What is the purpose of this statement? I would have to know what the purpose is before I could answer your questions.

I prefer a more complete confession of faith that elaborates many more doctrines.

peace to you

 

[Guido]

What is the purpose of this statement? I would have to know what the purpose is before I could answer your questions.

I prefer a more complete confession of faith that elaborates many more doctrines.

peace to you

Thank you for your feedback.

It was supposed to be a replacement of my old sermonette that I wrote, but it turned out not to be much.

 

[Dr. Bob]

A little theologically confusing/repetitious. I'd work on the wording more. It is a good start.

Example: "Jesus Christ Lord of all Creation, who lived, died, and rose again, who died on a cross, who, when he died, suffered the wages of the sins of all"