It is hard to say since he seems unable to articulate it clearly.
As far as I can tell, I articulated my view of the Atonement clearly. I think it will s more that it does not meet your expectations. But I never claimed to be a wordsmith.
I'll simplify and offer a comparison of theories by allowing another articulate. You also struggled with understanding the Penal Substitution Theory of Atonement. Here is Morrisons' summary of the two:
The Classic View
Classically, the Christus Victor theory of Atonement is widely considered to be the dominant theory for most of the historical Christian Church. In this theory, Jesus Christ dies in order to defeat the powers of evil (such as sin, death, and the devil) in order to free mankind from their bondage. This is related to the Ransom view with the difference being that there is no payment to the devil or to God. Within the
Christus Victor framework, the cross did not pay off anyone but defeated evil thereby setting the human race free.
The Penal Substitution Theory of Atonement
Penal Substitutionary Atonement is a development of the Reformation. The Reformers, Specifically Calvin and Luther, took Anselm’s Satisfaction theory and modified it slightly. They added a more legal (or forensic) framework into this notion of the cross as satisfaction. The result is that within Penal Substitution, Jesus Christ dies to satisfy God’s wrath against human sin. Jesus is punished (penal) in the place of sinners (substitution) in order to satisfy the justice of God and the legal demand of God to punish sin. In the light of Jesus’ death, God can now forgive the sinner because Jesus Christ has been punished in the place of the sinner, in this way meeting the retributive requirements of God’s justice. This legal balancing of the ledgers is at the heart of this theory, which claims that Jesus died for legal satisfaction. It’s also worth mentioning that in this theory the notion of imputed righteousness is postulated.