You have failed at "journalistic writing" it's irrelevant that the criminal was black.I'm attempting to practice journalistic writing. The following is an attempt at objective news.
A black man fell asleep in his car while at a Wendy's drive-thru in Atlanta. Cars started going around him and the police were called. The man, named Rayshard Brooks failed a sobriety test and became agitated when he was arrested. He ends up in a scuffle with police, and grabs one police officer's taser. He runs away and turns around to use the taser but misses one of the officers in pursuit.
You are already trying to insert a narrative that is not at issue.
Let me reword "Ends up in a 'scuffle' with police....." (I love the passive verbiage you use, as though any of us going about our daily lives will ("end up in a scuffle with" police.)
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The man demonstrated a willingness to engage in, or use, violence in order to resist the law, that makes him a danger to the community which must be responded to.
Of course he was "agitated" that he was arrested again, always passive verbiage with a criminal.
Let me now reword "grabs a police officer's taser"
Has demonstrated that he now is not only willing to resist law enforcement with violence, but will in fact, apprehend a potentially dangerous and debilitating weapon with which he is nor trained in order to continue to engage in criminal behavior which endangers the community.
After apprehending a potentially dangerous weapon from police he turns to run and potentially endanger the rest of the community while already demonstrating that he is:He is shot three times afterwards while his back is to police.
1.) Willing to engage in violent force against police
2.) Happy to take their non-lethal options and use them against them, and continue to endanger the community.
Let me ask you a question journalistic genius....
What were the cops supposed to do?
Use a non-lethal tool against the obviously violent criminal taking their weapons into the community?
What should they do?
TAZE HIM?
He took that option away
Because she's stupid.The Chief of the Atlanta PD has resigned.
It won't she's an idiot, and probably shouldn't have gotten the job in the first place.She believes it is best to build trust with the community.
I predict acquittal.The police officer that shot Rayshard Brooks while running away has been terminated and may face charges
He took down a man willing to engage in violence with law enforcement, take their tools of debilitation, and run into a community with them in a state of willingness to commit violence.
I pray he is afforded then, a long, restful vacation where he is reinstated with full back-pay.The other officer on the scene is on administrative leave.
Of course it did...because people write these stories like you do.....Rioting broke out tonight in Atlanta.
With passive verbiage like:
"A black guy 'got into a scuffle with police' ".
Which is equivalent to:
"A chaste and virginal young woman 'found herself pregnant' ".
Of course it was. You didn't have to include that information.The Wendy's where the incident occurred was burned down by arsonists.
I could assume lawless thugs would have done that.
Duh. no surprise there....a good shooting was turned into a National news event thanks to people who think like you....Several vehicles suffered arson. A CNN news crew was attacked by the rioters and a camera was destroyed.
Again, the passive verbiage....the vehicles "suffered arson".
Not, were lawlessly burned by criminals but "suffered arson"...because "suffering" is a proper verb ascribed to what a vehicle might undergo.
Are you really published?
Who would publish anything you write?
Beautiful coming from an ambulance-chaser....The family of Rayshard Brooks has hired an attorney, L. Chris Stewart. He said the following, which in itself is newsworthy.
"Police officers are the only job in this country where they can take your life, liberty and freedom," Stewart said. "It's the most powerful job in the country."
Police officers, should, in my opinion, all quit right here, right now, not show up, and let lawless thugs kill and destroy until you stop treating them like the enemy and beg them to come back to work.He argued that police must be held up to the standard of an Attorney or doctor from now on.
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